Kavita 15 - Me, Myself Comments

very relatable, a meaningful translation by Ms. Singh, thank you for sharing!

This is truly wonderful.........

Wow very touching and strong feeling. I am a story untold and left incomplete

Beautiful work Sir, thanks for sharing.However some how I feel there is a little more of depth in Kavita Singh poem that is yet to captured in translation (may be it is cause of the just the choice of words that you preferred) : -) Main 'musafir' hu un 'galiyon' ki.. jiski 'manjil' anjani hai... jise 'likha' nhi.... 'khuda' ne pura... main 'uski' adhuri ek 'kahani hu..

A lovely poem. We are all wanderers walking to an unknown goal

A succinct gem. A sense of incompleteness, of emptiness conveyed so effectively in so few words. Kudos. Every person feels that way at times but not everyone can put it into words. A big 10.

A nice poetic imagination, Unnikrishanan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks..

A nice poetic imagination, Unnikrishanan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

A nice poetic imagination, Unnikrishanan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

However So Very Beautifully Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Told, Of A Beautifully Precious, Life, Held In Gods Arms, With Incredible Roads..Yet To Journey And Unfold! ! ! ! ! May Your Paths Find.. The Beauty That's Laid Out For Us In The Day Time. And In The Night, May You Find.. The Stars Laid A Beautiful Path For You, That So Brightly Shines! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Excellently Done! ! ! ! !

I am totally enamored of this piece. Succinct, simple, and yet opens a world of compassion and empathy for her as well as ourselves. We are all on a journey to finish ourselves, complete ourselves. Excellent choice of poem to translate, my friend. I thank you very very much. I know I commented earlier but I really like reading this over and over and musing on its style and grace..,

Such emotion of deep sentiments written with such depth. Wonderful poem of Kavita, most beautifully translated by Unnikrishnan. Dear, dear friend, thank you for sharing. A full vote for you! :)

I am a story yet untold That God has left incomplete... meaningful and sentimental write. Thank to dear Kavita for composition and you, dear Unnikrishnan, for translation.

I like the musing tone of this piece by Kavita. There is a lot of power in subtlety, we should all try it more often because she is proving its worth. And thank you, my gentle friend, for translating her so so lovely work. There is an ocean of delightful poetry I would never enjoy if it wasn't for you. You are PH's finest friend! ! ! !