Saturday, February 4, 2017

Kavita 13 - Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Separated you are far from me
Together are just me and my loneliness

You have been just a dream
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rini Shibu 21 June 2017

Deep pain of separation rendered in this poem..well written

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 June 2017

Thank you Rini. Obliged! ! !

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Susan Williams 07 March 2017

First of all, thank you for opening up the world of Kavita Singh's poetry to those of us who only speak their native tongue. I would never have known her or her artistry if it had not been for your kindness. Thank you, thank you, thank you.... now I would love to read one of your epic poems... it has been quite a while since you've taken your fans on a journey to ancient times and ancient cultures.... :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2017

Hi Susan, Thank you for all the support you are giving me and to Kavita. Of course, Kavita is a wonderful artist, very talented poet. Your words will definitely bed a great encouragement for her. I would convey your appreciation to herr. Thank you Susie.

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Tom Billsborough 17 February 2017

A delightful rendering of a fine poem. Well done, my friend.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 February 2017

Deeply obliged. Thanks....

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Bri Edwards 13 February 2017

i plan to put into Section B (just started today) of February's 2017 showcase today. bri ;) thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 February 2017

A lovely poem of loss and loneliness. A succinct gem of a piece. A lot said with an economy of words. A perfect 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 February 2017

Thank you Nosheen. Actually, every word of appreciation you have recorded here is due to Kavita. She has rendered it so beautifully. I have just tried to render it in English. Your words give me immense encouragement to attempt more translations. Thank you once again. You made my day! !

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Bri Edwards 11 February 2017

thank you for making this poem available to us who speak English exclusively. the repetition of the word loneliness expresses the absoluteness of the feeling for the speaker. to MyPoemList. and i plan to use it in my showcase: Section B for February 2017, which is not started yet, giving credit to the poet and the translation-poet. thanks. bri

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 07 February 2017

Loneliness haunts.wonderful translation, thanks poet all my credit

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 February 2017

Thank you Saraswathy. It is the beauty of original poem by Kavita, that helped me here. I'd convey your appreciation to her too. Regards....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 February 2017

Reality is wonderfully perceived with loneliness. Feelings determine life's essential strength. This poem is entirely wonderful really. Wisely penned poem is shared here.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 February 2017

Sir, The poem by Kavita, as you've written, is extremely passionate and beautiful. What I have done with it, is anybody's question...

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Regards to kavita Singh, nice poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 February 2017

Thank you Ram, I will ask Kavita to read your observations.

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Jaya Das 04 February 2017

Separated you are far from me Close are just me and my loneliness so beautiful and true are these lines....describing loneliness thanks for another beautiful translation

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 February 2017

Hi Jaya, Thank you for reading this poem. And Ms Kavita Singh deserves all the accolades for this beautiful poem. GThank you Jaya..

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