Kavita 12 - It Is Life Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Kavita 12 - It Is Life

Rating: 5.0


These are the pages of my life
Some are frayed, some folded;
When the storms wreaked havoc
Often wrecked, yet survived
My life has got ensnarled;
On which intersection
Do I get it disentangled?
And my desires fulfilled?

I have a long way to go
The roads are not easy
And I do not know why
Weather changes so often

But, of hope I have a ray
That I'd be able some day
To achieve my destination
Search for which is still on.

This is a translation of the poem Zindagi * by KAVITA SINGH
Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a translation of the poem 'Zindagi' by Ms Kavita Singh.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 23 January 2017

A great piece of writing. Poetically pleasing. The reader is enthralled. A huge 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 January 2017

Hi Nosheen, I do not know whether I have able to do justice to the exquisite poem of Kavita. Nosheen, if you have liked it, it is because the original is soo beautiful. Thank you Nosheen for the encouragement you are giving to me as well as to Kavita.

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Alyx True Edge 03 August 2024

The stormy currents of personal growth, and the lifeline of a life goal

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Chinedu Dike 03 August 2021

A creative and compelling rendition, brilliant, thought provoking, intense, clear... A work of an intricate mind..

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Jeanette Telusma 23 July 2017

...But, of hope I have a ray That I'd be able some day To achieve my destination Search for which is still on. I really enjoyed this poem especially the last verse. It's so optimistic and it redirects our attention to what's to come. It makes the process of going through so much more easier. Keep writing...100+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 July 2017

Thank you Jeanette. Obliged.

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Rini Shibu 30 June 2017

Beautiful poem.. Life is not easy, have to face difficulties Unexpectedly problems arises Be confident and move on Because there is hopes of Ray ahead I liked it This reflects mine poem..the tunnel

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 July 2017

Thank you Rini. This poem is a translation of the beautiful poem by Kavita Singh.. just proves that people might be living in different countries/places/environments; but they think alike...

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Rebecca Navarre 31 March 2017

Oh! ! ! ! ! Extremely Well Done! ! ! Beautifully Put! ! ! ! ! A Beautifully Hopeful Poem! ! ! ! ! With Beautiful Rays! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 March 2017

Hi Becca, Thank you for reading this most beautiful poem by Kavita Singh. And offering the very encouraging comments. The appreciation is actually due to Kavita. I doubt whether I hv captured the beauty of her poem in full. Becca, Kavita is such a talented poet that I feel proud to be associated with her. Obliged! ! !

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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