These are the pages of my life
Some are frayed, some folded;
When the storms wreaked havoc
Often wrecked, yet survived
My life has got ensnarled;
On which intersection
Do I get it disentangled?
And my desires fulfilled?
I have a long way to go
The roads are not easy
And I do not know why
Weather changes so often
But, of hope I have a ray
That I'd be able some day
To achieve my destination
Search for which is still on.
The stormy currents of personal growth, and the lifeline of a life goal
A creative and compelling rendition, brilliant, thought provoking, intense, clear... A work of an intricate mind..
...But, of hope I have a ray That I'd be able some day To achieve my destination Search for which is still on. I really enjoyed this poem especially the last verse. It's so optimistic and it redirects our attention to what's to come. It makes the process of going through so much more easier. Keep writing...100+++++
Beautiful poem.. Life is not easy, have to face difficulties Unexpectedly problems arises Be confident and move on Because there is hopes of Ray ahead I liked it This reflects mine poem..the tunnel
Thank you Rini. This poem is a translation of the beautiful poem by Kavita Singh.. just proves that people might be living in different countries/places/environments; but they think alike...
Oh! ! ! ! ! Extremely Well Done! ! ! Beautifully Put! ! ! ! ! A Beautifully Hopeful Poem! ! ! ! ! With Beautiful Rays! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
Hi Becca, Thank you for reading this most beautiful poem by Kavita Singh. And offering the very encouraging comments. The appreciation is actually due to Kavita. I doubt whether I hv captured the beauty of her poem in full. Becca, Kavita is such a talented poet that I feel proud to be associated with her. Obliged! ! !
A great piece of writing. Poetically pleasing. The reader is enthralled. A huge 10.
Hi Nosheen, I do not know whether I have able to do justice to the exquisite poem of Kavita. Nosheen, if you have liked it, it is because the original is soo beautiful. Thank you Nosheen for the encouragement you are giving to me as well as to Kavita.