I Wish So Dearly
I had wished so dearly to meet him
He did come, for sure,
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The unsaid and unshared love that remains only in the heart wishing it to be felt by the other where words arent required to convey...it is such a deep feeling....Love the way that depth is portrayed....Beautiful..This is infact inspiring me to write on this.....thanks..: -) A big 10+ for sure
Hi Ashika, Very true. We know quite well that love need no language to express it. The eyes speak volumes to the loved one. We all have gone through this experience. But unrequited lone inflicts a pain, a wound that time fails to erase... The above lines are just a few drops of tears, that do nothing to tend the wound..... Lovely poem by Kavita. Pl do read the original...Thank you Ashika.
Typo..please treat 'The translation made by you'...it is inadvertently done.
This is a beautiful poem on love and feeling so nicely executed. The translation made by is so impressive. I feel a fountain is flowing gentely. I cite...I had wished to talk to him He did offer me a smile But spoke no word to me. Thank you dear poet for sharing this here.
Thank you sir, for the lovely comments. But the appreciation is, in fact, due to Kavitaji. Thank you, I shall convey your good words to her.
some times distance lends beauty to the scene this is one such an example so it seems
A beautiful translation of a beautiful poem. Feelings pouring straight out of heart. Each word touches me deeply. Thank you for sharing.
Hi Nosheen, Thank you for the lovely comments. As you are able to read the original, I treasure your words. Though, they are actually due to to Kavita. Thank you Nosheen....
A lovely translation of a beautiful poem written by Kavita ji. Sometimes, you wish for so many things in life, but it remains a wish, it never happens. Through you, i am able to read Kavita Singh's poems. They are poignant and full of deep emotion. Thank you Unni for sharing it with us.
As you have noticed, Kavita is a talented poet. Her command over the language is fantastic. I am sure, I am not able to capture the beauty of her poem in my translation. But thank you Geeta. Obliged
A poignant yet beautiful poem of love. A vivid portrayal of an unrequited love. Beautifully crafted and translated.10
Thank you for the appreciation of the poem. This beautiful poem is written by talented poet Kavita Singh. And the appreciation is actually due to her. Thank you
An ever so deeply beautiful and moving poem! .. Beautiful heart within! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this Kavita! .. And Unnikrishnan! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Hi Becca, Thank you for your wonderful words of appreciation of the poem. This is translation of the lovely poignant poem by Kavita Singh, who writes in Hindi. I will convey your good words to her. Thank you.