Kavita 08 - Desire Comments

Lovely poem, a smooth flow of joy. Very deep and passionate write. Thanks for sharing, Unnikrishnan.

Ever So Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! ! Lovely Imagery! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

You and your writings dissolved in world of love. Beautiful Rini

You and your writings dissolved in world of love. Beautiful

liked the poem..the intensity of desire....

A lovely poem. Profusely expressed emotions. V heart-touching.10

Hi Frances, PH does not allow me to a reply to your comment. I have to thank you for the comment. The poem is, definitely beautiful. But my translation may mot have captured its emotions in full. And your suggestion to translate your poems. Sincerely, I do not dare to. But now that you have suggested, I will give a try. Please give me a little time. Let me choose a poem.... I will inform you.. Thank you for the suggestion. And thank you all the more giving all this encouragement.... ..I should give you many 100s for this comment.

Brilliantly translated...that is an art in itself :) Let us make our home In this land of love, where The season of love lasts for ever We shall build our universe here