Thursday, January 12, 2017

Kavita 03 - A Letter Of Love In Your Name Comments

Rating: 5.0

The words that have dried upon my lips
The dreams hiding behind the veil of my eyes
The lonesome nights or the promises of yore
That could not be reduced to words.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2021

A love letter worthy of profuse admirations! Powerfully expressed with profound touch of emotions. I have written thousands of letters to my beloved but have not written in such brilliant way...Top score

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Chinedu Dike 24 February 2020

Very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Beautiful eloquence with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, my friend.

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2017

May I entrance my pen on the brine of my tears Or shall I write down how lonesome my life‘s without you Or may I write down my request for a meeting with you Or a recommendation to forget you. - - - - - - - - - The heartache of a pining lover has been so beautifully expressed. Thanks Unnikrishnan E.S. for this.English translation of Kavita Singh's poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 January 2017

Who wouldn't melt to read such a lovely letter. That's a perfect love letter that only a lucky man would get. A 10

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Sister Frances 13 January 2017

Wonderful poem, one of your best. It's heart felt words and so honestly written. I am so envious of the lines... The dreams hiding behind the veil of my eyes....Or all that is hidden in my silent words. Brilliant my friend, i am so glad I visited :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2017

Hi Frances, Thank you for reading the poem and offering your appreciation; But the credit should go to Ms Kavita Singh, the author of the original poem, which I hv just translated. By-the-by, Kavita (in most Indian languages, including Sanskrit, Hindi, Malayalam..) means poetry. thank you again...

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Liza Sudina 12 January 2017

This poem reminds of golden days and wakes the tenderest feelings! My heart asks me to send you this message An emotion-filled letter of love, in your name.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2017

Thank you Liza.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2017

Hi Kavita, Are you reading this? ? ?

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2017

Hidden in my silent words. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 January 2017

Thank you sir, for your kind gesture of reading this poem. But this is a translation of a poem by Ms Kavita Singh. So the appreciation is actually due to her. Thank you sir.

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