Kathirippu (Malayalam) Comments

The translation has failed and at the end I am left with disappointment over that and I am no more worried about the intensity of feeling with which you wait... The norms set for writing in one language differs from one another. English cannot go well with certain translations and so you may better write another poem in English not necessarily addressed to an English speaking lady.

the poem in malayalam i did not follow, but yes the poem in Eng too good......a gud write Aswath

The poem in malayalam is brilliant and flow is good...Good poem...Well read.

The poem in Malayalam is brilliant, the Engllish version of it cannot come anywhere near! But still a great attempt!

you are not a poet yet to be born, you are a born poet!