Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Kashkol Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aiy bhikhari bata tere kashkol mein,
yeh jo sikkey chamakte hayn kisne diye,
ismein Adam bhi hay ismein Hawa bhi hay,
ismein masoom si unki taqseer bhi,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Imaginative and emotive poem nicely penned. My favourite line is....rooh zindah hay zindah rahegi sada, .....10

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2015

Kya baat hai Janab................Sagar ko ghagar mein samet liya aapne...Sari kaynat ki ek jhalak pal bhar mein dikhladi............Another Masterstroke

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Khalid Saifullah 23 September 2015

A really thoughtful poem........................................

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