Saturday, June 4, 2016

Kash Tum Mujhko Thoda Sa Waqt Dete Comments

Rating: 5.0

wo lawj the hi nhi mere pas jo hal-e-dil baya kr pate,
kash tm meri ghamoshi ko thoda sa waqt dete...
mere halaton se tum bhi muh mod k chal diye,
kash meri jhuki najro ko uthne ka mauka dete...
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reetika bajpai
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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2016

Nicely articulated poem. This might be enveloped in sadness but shows conviction and faith. sath marne ki kasmei har baar khai tumne, kbhi sath jeene ka mauka to dete....

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ishan Awasthi 04 June 2016

bahut heart touching poem likhi h aapne REETIKA Jl magar lafz aur khaamosh ko correct kr len 8 on 10 frm my side

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Ahatisham Alam 04 June 2016

best write Khushu i think i can understand it better than any other...

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Reetika Bajpai 13 July 2016

thanks..

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