Friday, November 17, 2006

Karmic Churn Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Life's energy's expended
in vicious circle churn
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Jonathan ROBIN
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M S 17 November 2006

the last lines deliver a most excellent kick. and i must applaude you on the structure, because the rhymes have that winding, churning build up to them, before finally resolving.2005 was a good year for you :)

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Jonathan ROBIN

Jonathan ROBIN

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London
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