God has written down in brief
Our endless life story
That is being played
On the seven-storied stage of sky!
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there are so many ways of killing yourself one of them is by reading this essay which should be titled " having a heart-attack"
A poignant rendition of words written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Asif and do remain enriched.
Philosophy is explained in simple words. Appreciate the attempt of the poet.
Great piece Asif..a very edifying & inspiring spiritual and religious poem!
A precious poem! I loved the lines, 'If you are a firm believer/You will be able to go to paradise'. i would vote this poem with a 10
Even God forgets some things After zillions and zillions of years ? ? ? ? ? ? strange......... how can God ever forget. philosophy of Islam , you have pictured well here dear poet......... thank you.
I honor your views but differ with your thoughts that God forgets. He never forgets, He knows the past, He knows the present and He knows the future. Lohe Mahfooz is a write in which every thing is written, e.g.. it was written that I shall disagree with your thoughts and shall let you know through a comment. But it was at all not a binding on me.
i'm afraid it's nearly impossible speak the truth always. if you can, you're great.
A great poem with a great message! I really like it! Kat ^-^
My religion is also Islam, and your poem seems to bring me into another verge of it.. Great piece of work..
good poem, I have no undersatnding of islam but your poem seems to speak very honnestly about the faith mentioned in the title. also the first line was amazing, what an opener!
Dear great poet, I think right path to paradise is not by preaching for God teachings and urging people to abide by God's laws only but also by good deeds here on earth towards God's people, what is worth of consideration isn't what someone believes in but what is how dealing with others and the good he could offer to them. Your writing is sheer and beautiful.
Your really odd and audacious as well!