Karma's Lessons Comments

Amazing write. we also loose tempers but as the years pass down, we learn many things especially to forgive one. Powerful poem. Loved it.

we all lose of tempers from time to time. I guess thats just life. a fine write Dee

Amazing. What a wonderful, and powerful poem. I absolutely love it! So good. I'd give it a double-ten plus if I could.

So moving, so unpretentious! In youth, we are likely to blow up for silly reasons! But as we mature in age, our temper tantrums die down and we are able to see the weaknessess of others with greater tolerance and understanding! Now your heart is filled with love for your Dad and remorse for the offense you gave him! Very sweetly expressed, Dee!

.. what a wonderful write.... very sweet indeed...

Such beautiful words Dee. Your Dad knows how much you miss him for sure. You have given us such an insight to your life and I thank you so much for this.

A wonderful and beautifully crafted write Dee. This really and truly touched my heartr and soul. It brings back many fond memories of my father. Forgive and forget are two great words that gets us through life. A very inspiring write to have read. Lovely.

Hello Dee what a lovely thought to send your message winging its way to your dad in heaven by way of this lovely poem the great thing about parents is their unconditional love so im sure your dad is returning your love a hundredfold.Great read well done

I think we all get angry from time to time, it is human nature. I am sure your dad knew this and understood, and we all have karmic debts to pay of. You have expressed your feelings so well here Dee in an excellent poem.

Such a touching marvelous poem! I admire d way u recollect in fine rhyme. My man is a great smasher of tings too in fits of jealousies. I tel u yor dad must b proud of dis poem. Marilyn monroe eh. Hmm. Hey n Pls do read my latest poem too.