Sunday, August 20, 2017

Karma Comments

Rating: 5.0

You'll try to see me
What you'll see, a mere silhouette

You'll try to feel me
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Nayyab Younas Khan
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Insharah : 10 July 2020

Brilliant ❤️

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Konab Ghumman 26 April 2019

what a beautiful comparison !

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Chuy Amante 20 September 2017

treat them as you'll want for yourself The happiness rule! Another great way to say unconditional love! a great write from a great mind and heart

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Lydia Pollard 13 September 2017

I can't believe that any body can make 9668_bucks in one month on the internet.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 August 2017

A deep write on the concept of karma. Indeed, we have to pay for our misdeeds. So let's spread kindness n goodness to be repaid with the same. A thoughtful n thought-provoking write.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2017

I am not your saint doll, I am a human with sins but still a human Treat me like one, treat them as you'll want for yourself Very very fine poem indeed...... cactus and jasmine.. just wonderful comparisons. i wonder at your determination in life, your thoughts.. you will become great if you go on like this.. God bless u. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2017

Because my dear if you sow cactus, how will you reap Jasmine? A thoughtful poem.

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Sarah Persson 20 August 2017

Very nicely put into words of Do unto others as you'd have done to you. Very nicely penned poem, thank you Nayyab

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