Its not my fault you left me
So why blame me for all the bad stuff
I didn't ask you to abandon me
I didn't ask you to forget about me
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That was pretty good. You should try painting a picture with your words rather than being blunt. Use your imagination to get your point across. I see you're 13. I'm 15 and started writing poetry about 3 years ago and mind sounded like yours. Go check out mind and tell me what you think :)
Mind = mine. I have no idea how I did that twice haha.