Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Karla Comments

Rating: 5.0

Most things are left for one to discover;
as arrows of cupid fly setting moods,
revealing true hearts' lovely intention
kisses slowly melted the hard cover.
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Mark Trajano
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Ency Bearis 04 September 2011

Profound thoughts of love with such good intention, great piece.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 September 2011

ceraphimes cheerfully approached beauty. holding the great treasure with my rough hands, Superb write and fantasti imageries here......i specially like the above two lines..renders the poem really classic one...i enjoyed and hope the others will enjoy too

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