Karachi Waiting For The Clouds Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Karachi Waiting For The Clouds

Rating: 5.0


What else are the Hell even birds unwell!
Flowers dried and died on the ground they fell
Still breathing and whispering in faint voices
Terrorist is the sun extremist in his vices
Dear Mother Earth! Order your eldest sons,
Winds, the beloveds may join the oceans
Hop, soon the fighters, will take off, and intercept,
The satanic old sun must be defeated,
But exiled only to come back in the winter
Having learnt some affection that of a father!
Karachi is waiting for the clouds of love,
A bird has come out, welcome, it's a dove!

Tuesday, May 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A great metaphorical write. A thoughtful and gallant piece of work for Karachi. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Khalid Saifullah 08 May 2018

A great metaphor! Karachi is a cosmopolitan city where there have been clashes. Ethnic clashes, sectarian clashes, and political clashes. Karachi is a polarized city. It has become too hot but it's situated at the shores of a lovely sea of love. Let us hop in hope of the clouds of love that should rise and shower at its dry soil.

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Kelly Kurt 08 May 2018

Rain is a blessing everywhere.

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

An imaginative but poignant write.+++10 Robert

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