I saw a girl, a fair beauty,
Whose sunny brightness
Impressed my eyes.
I thought i was confused,
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a melodious laughter followed----i like this line, i see in my mind how she laughed, it is a cute scene, making readers remember the days of their acquaintance with a person they like.NICE ONE.
This is soooo good. lOVED it to bits... the way you have expressed your feeling in words....is remakable! ! ! ! ! ++10 best wishes for you