Monday, November 3, 2008

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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Winnie Angel 21 May 2009

a bright and cheerful environ u had depicted.

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Sandra Fowler 15 November 2008

The thought of 230 lanterns paints a magic picture in the mind of the reader. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Shimon Weinroth 10 November 2008

without conjunctions and prepositions the lovely poem reads a bit disjointed best wishes Shimon

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Seema Chowdhury 03 November 2008

very nice description and flow.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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