Heavy stones
Push on my brain
Brains crashed,
smashed
...
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Lovely poem, very original. I especially loved the title with the ~^^^~ and ~^^^~ Ha! very creative, with simple and easy diction. Poetry made simple, that is....! !
It is a beautiful script, no? Must be almost impossible to learn though, I wish you luck!
Poetfreak comment: You just keep trying! I'm also trying to learn french, with little success so far. But just keep trying. I hope to read a poem from you in Kanji someday. 19 Sep 2011 by Kendzi.S.