Monday, February 27, 2012

Kamikaze Teenage Boy - A High School Massacre Comments

Rating: 5.0

His life was built with a self destruct switch
That's been awakened through constant abuse
Every moment is a cage that's been eating him with rage
Words cannot not delay, what doctors call a phase
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Kevin Patrick
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Dave Walker 02 March 2012

A very powerful poem, a truly great write. your style of poetry is fantastic.

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Poet Of The River 29 February 2012

their is no words to express the power of your words here... well done. it captures the true side of things. you truly are a good and well placed poet.

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