.kali Comments

An interesting poem. Love it.

this is such an awesome poem. life giving river, the whole scenery has been painted with words, easy flow, beautifully rhythmic.

Kali, is a strong spirits of life in every words

Strong, powerful, a brilliant description of the river Kali, finding it's destination into the open sea, fabulous.

Words in the poem flow like a river. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.

Natural river, a nature's power. Its beautiful said - 'What makes a river so restful to people is that it doesn't have any doubt - it is sure to get where it is going, and it doesn't want to go anywhere else.” Your poem has shown its power and destination. A very good read in deed. Thank you.

tis a lovely poem you picture... .. and if I had a patal to float on down to sea I'd fill it with puriri flowers and send it on to thee! ! !

You have really described the whole surroundings of the place so beautifully in this poem. Well written.

oh lovely poem... i've been to all the places u mentioned and much more.... kali river is beautifull n dangerous too..... (ps: my next trip is to dandeli.. white river rafting in the kali river) thanks for sharing this beauty.....

I have not even been there but I can see it! Lovely writing Vidayadhar.. it is inspiring.

This piece made me enjoying a trip from origin to the 'sangamam' of a river with a name which I like the most!

nature yet scintillating by all its beauty across the sahydri range with hydel for mankind, beautiful narration, well penned, thanks for sharing

Nicely rhymed a nd flows like the river its named for

The lovely river comes alive through you mastery of rhyme. Enchantingly it carries with it a magic that enhances the countryside. An enjoyable read.

Charming sahyadry range, nature reveals its true treasures, like a painting it spreads over...10

A fine lyric piece. Rhymes make the music more meaningful. As always, Sandra

Multi-coloured 'panorama', causes a sweet melancholy … beautiful … thanks …

Some inconsistency in rhyme, and I thought the ending did not match the body or beginning of the work. I give it a solid 8 as it is readable and may find its supporters. GW62

the poem flows deep blue and serene...high imagination and expression skills vidyadhar! *10*

Surprisingly beautifully, the grief and a sea charm together fly... 10... Best wishes, Tsira