Kaleidoscope Kindness Comments

I love alliteration! And the title alliteration was nicely placed in an inconspicuous place until we read it and then it lights up! This is a poem of light - in the gifts, in the gratitude expressed, in the confidence that this goodness will go on... The troubadours called this kind of relationship L'Amour de loin or Faraway Love. They considered it the highest form of love because it was kept alive purely by poetry carrying feelings back and forth. Your poem keeps L'Amour de loin alive.

Beautiful words Susan

Fair Lady, I am honored beyond words... a delightfully lovely poem from a delightfully lovely maiden... and my friend.

just so lovely....great similitude.... a far off romance and the associated longing and desire and the recognition of physical dimension.... good flow and charming v nice liked

Susan, this is told like a storybook romance....such a beautiful write! I hope your birthday was spent in glory, and just as described right here in a story! Love reading your beautiful poems!

This poem is so appreciative of the kindness and thoughtfulness of the friend who sent you birthday wishes! It takes quite a heart to appreciate ones feelings of love in this way. Very poetic expressions indeed! I love the title too, but the last word is short of one s in 'kindness'.