Kaleidoscope Comments
By twists and turns
Tiny fragments like
Coloured glass combine;
Create random
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To face one another Around an axis; Ordered and symmetrical, In pursuance of preservation That equilibrium Might always prevail. These words i liked.
I think this is a great poem. You do a nice job of mimicking a kaleidoscope using only your carefully selected words. This is a vivid poem with pretty words. The last three lines complete your poem with just enough summation without overdoing it. A great poem. I like your writing
Thank you Pamela. I am currently interested in poetry that observes balance and patterns in the world.
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7/23/2025 11:34:48 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful imagination, Good........