Thursday, March 10, 2011

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I pass in a boat now my lonely hour
As the west wind blows
Beneath the evening sky,
Branches of palm trees sway
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Abhay Vignesh Liginlal
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 16 July 2011

i feel the loneliness in this poem, anyway, we all go through some rough times sometimes, but life is like that.

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Rekha Mandagere 11 March 2011

The picture of human life and it its uninspiring pursuits is beautifully brought out.Thanks for sharing it. Marks 10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 March 2011

It is a soulful write. I hope you don; t spend all your life by yourself.

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Martin Lochner 10 March 2011

great imagism here and liked this very much!

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