Friday, November 17, 2006

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There, I spot us…
caught in a web
of words brash and bashful both
Here I watch us strange and quirky
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Shivapriya Surve
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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 March 2008

Old order changes yielding place to new.

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Preeti - is here! 21 December 2006

As I see it, this one talks about getting caught in routine and then knowing that the change is imperative but still resisting it, that's us. Love your style of writing! Preets

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Shane Markie 20 December 2006

As Asma says, 'The only constant in life is change.' I'm reminded of the Mother Ganges (as some people in India refer to the Ganges River) as a metaphor for all life, both animal and human in this poem. Lovely work. Shane

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Asma Bahrainwala 18 November 2006

the only constant in life is 'change'... you have used a very relevant analogy...and its beautifully pieced together... Asma...

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