Spilled are the flashy colors unlimited
Gleaming in their light of shining frenzy
Their hues ranging from dark to light pearl
As they sweep deliriously in the mind
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Each word is aptly placed to give the whole effect, especially the third and final stanzas are so wonderfullly woven with feeling. True emotions bring out granduer and glow to poems and this is found here. Wonderful.
A sensual display of the mind captured in words...truly kaleidoscopey...! A way to wow the one(s) you might choose to.... My mind's in a blur still....! Cheers. Subroto.
I sense a star is about to burst, showering us with kaleidoscope snowflakes that no one can resist but to catch with their tongue to taste true poetry. Keep writing.
A passionate piece that blended colors of a kalidoscope with those of human feelings & emotions. Wonderful poem & a joy to read. Ravensong