Monday, April 30, 2007

Kalahari Butterflies Comments

Rating: 5.0

white blossoms in the air
one more spring in the exile I chose
that becomes addictive to itself
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Frank Bana
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Francesca Johnson 30 April 2007

A mind flight, like the butterflies, that flits off to remembered places. An enjoyable read, Frank. Love, Fran xx

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Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2007

Stunning imagery in this, mixed up places and feelings gave this an alternative twist that strangely worked..... lovely. HG: -) xx

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Derrick Clark 30 April 2007

the had some poetic flow about it, keep it up.

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