Kaila George Comments

I really love this poem, for the way you wrote it, I can feel the emotions writen inside of it. This poem is writen very great, with a great ending of becoming free, and to be able to do what you want, great job!

A study in survival, strength and beauty in motherhood. Protecting and teaching her young, that they may thrive despite seemingly insurmountable obstacles. Ralph, well written. I commend you.

its a sad one..i can feelt he misery in it..well done! !

its really show the pain you want show and its not your pain you are trying show but still you wrote it like you gone through it and well i am no expert but i think it a remarkable job well done i hope all ladies in your life live the life of heaven on earth..........well done

A terrific tribute.I loved the diction, the style.Superb!

Ralph, this is a magnificent, and bread-warming tribute to someone who has obviously had a most auspicious impact on your life, despite ostensibly the many Crosses she has beared...I have read several of her own works and conversate with her about this site and poetry in general...Both of you have the gift of Silent Word and the above tributive to a Mom, Mentor & Friend quite worthy of such potentate praise is proof solid...Nice Work! ~FjR~

Ralph, this is a magnificent, and bread-warming tribute to someone who has obviously had a most auspicious impact on your life, despite ostensibly the many Crosses she has beared...I have read several of her own works and conversate with her about this site and poetry in general...Both of you have the gift of Silent Word and the above tributive to a Mom, Mentor & Friend quite worthy of such potentate praise is proof solid...Nice Work! ~FjR~

Still speechless, its a beautiful poem and one that I will hold dear to my heart, thank you. Your Avid Fan KG