Lord, far from Vrindavan, I heard your Divine song
Enchanted and in a trance, I hummed as I walked along.
The air was cool, after the rain and mildly fragrant.
With soft, woody, sweet, delicate and light scent.
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i loved this poem, , the picture of ras leela really comes alive...am sure you must have composed this poem ina state of spiritual trance, , we often get this when we look at the miniature painting...my poem, , birth of a melody has hints of the birth of krishna, , , when read together, , it gives a nice feeling, , ,
Mamtaji, Celebrations of Lord Krishana’s birth Remind us of His miracles and mirth. You sweetly sing the melodies of divine deeds, Song strikes deep into mysteries of our creed. CP
Oh! I am blessed by reading this poem. I missed this one on Krishnashtami day. Reading this poem would have sufficed my prayers. What a great invocation of the Lord? This poem is lyrical too, like Venugaana........Thanks Mamtaji.
A Gospel writes, the right serving for the Lord Krishna.
you are really a blessed poet for having written this wonderful poem.thanx for sharing voted10 surya
Salutations, salutations and salutations to Lord Krishna n His Karma Doctrine! Thanks, mamta! !
Lovely narrative poem on Krishna Leela...your skillful pen has created a real masterpiece
ooh what a god you are krishna..the most wise and playful your nature...lovely poem on krishna's leela...thanks for this share mam
Lovely sweet poetic description where an ammmmmmazing taste of spirituality! I loved it bcoz i know the story of rass leela! excellent! 10+