Kaash Barish Kch Der Or Hoti… Comments

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Bahut achi poem hai...

With this inaugural poem, you are welcome to this poetry Forum, Dear Priyank. Looking forward to reading your poems in coming days. Thanks.

दिल को छू लेने वाली कल्पनाशीलता लाजवाब है. कविता का अंत अत्यंत भावुकता पूर्ण हो गया है. धन्यवाद. Lkin ab barish ruk chuki h…wo ja chuki h…. Chai thandi padi h…kamra bikhra pada h…