Friday, January 25, 2008

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Rating: 4.9

Superpose your silk eye-lashes in anticipation
And here as I bestow a new world upon your lips
Feel the shredded brush of lip-lines smudging & reshaping
Into newer landscapes
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Nibedita Deb
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Nibedita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Krishna Baalu 30 January 2009

Yes very intense feeling well worded Krishna Baalu

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 October 2008

Lively description with fine words! .......10+

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premji premji 04 October 2008

intense feelings well done

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Meer Mushfique Mahmood 28 June 2008

Nibedita, just beautify the world with your 'music and poetry all give way to the threshold of eternity'

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Mohammad Ilyas 17 June 2008

Passionately, deep in feeling and thought.

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James Bessant 04 February 2008

Beautiful language and imagery

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Patricia Gale 04 February 2008

Simply lovely work...

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