When you speak something to me
I think of kissing your voice
When you sing a song
I think of kissing your tone
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It reflects the boundless passion of a lover for his beloved. Everything she does attracts a kissing response of a different kind. Nicely articulated. Thanks.
Many many thanks Rajnishji, for your sweet remark...the poem is basically about love in the form of kiss........
beautiful poem kishore, kiss ur mind is such a beautiful line. loved it
adored this poem, beautiful, a heartful kiss of admiration, so many beautiful lines I love
This poem is an experiment for converting the physical kiss into mental kiss....and the support from the readers is tremendous.......I thank you for your bold support.......
Thank you Bharati for your applause for my poem of love... I am inspired...
A superbly composed poem- -Love is more of heart and mind than body.A lovely poem extolling- Kiss in its ethereal form.
When you compose a poem on me I think of kissing your words When you start crying I think of kissing your tears Really superb..A great poem on kiss, with so much loving touch and concern..It appeals the heart. A poem with real poetic skill. 10 marks for it.
Thank you Seema for your great inspiration on my poem...kiss can have divine feelings also....
wao...excellence of a poetic form of love! ! ! Amazing poem I must say.Love your art of writing.10 out of 10.
aahh! ..kiss is the metaphor used for love and care...such a beautiful poem...Thanks.
With such a loving hand, you pen of the power of a kiss. Who would not love to have a love such as this. So brilliant in it's simplicity of expressed affection. BRAVO!
Wow....Beautiful poem...How can one express his/her love towards a lover better than this? If love is there at heart it will over flow through words. That is what you have depicted in this poem. 10/10
Excellent expression. So many forms of love and its manifestations. I quote: When you start crying I think of kissing your tears And when you think of me I think of kissing your mind.
When you compose a poem on me I think of kissing your words When you start crying I think of kissing your tears... beautiful. really beautiful. there is so much of love in your heart...... very nice dear poet. tony
when i read your poem, i think like kissing your thought.... well written sir....
wonderful.....I just wanted to dissolve the stigma surrounding kiss.....
I have composed over thirty poems on kissing but not one is half as good as this one. you r sir a real kisser i am a misser. Only one minor suggestion Do not use caps for each line that's a computer's need not poetry's You are a kisser poet in deed i Love kisses but no one does kiss me Good compo on kisses read some of mine when you r not kissing thine AND MOMS SMILES WILL DO you good o well read poet. YOU!
The fact is I have not kissed anybody......the poem is a dream poem based on the dimensions of love which should encompass all the parameters like kiss in an illusory plane......thank you for your mind-blowing and sportive comments...