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excellent poem war is a terrible thing i too pray africa and all the world finds acceptance and tolerance

Made my blood turn to ice- well written my friend, may we remember them, your prayer is echoed by us all.

fantastic tribute..through your refelction I could actually feel the war scene

Again a good war poem from you.............keep it up..................a good write...............

Alf, I do beleive poetry about war and battle to be one of the most difficult to write. You do an outstanding job and not just with meter and rhyme but with feeling and philosophy. I like this very much and I am learning much from reading your work. thank you, Susan

A great write Alf, kept me enthralled all the way through. One was there with these two brave men. Very well produced and a pleasure to read. Thanks for the opportunity to do so. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Good write 10 but a bit 2 long I felt this poem needed more flow

well, this is very sweet poem i like the way you write good job! ! !

A very difficult time to write of and you have - Outstanding! Yes as it is written one day all weapons will turn to ploughs - how I pray with you this comes soon & all this madness is replaced with peace. God bless you Alf :) 10/10 Luv T

fantastic tribute write...well narrated to the utmost point into poetic presentation..great piece...10

yet wonderful tribute, by the lucid flow, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

Aaah Alf, how well you remember. How brilliantly you reflect. Well written my old friend. And what about our new CO. How great is he...

Excellently told tribute Alf...well written...10+++