Wednesday, August 16, 2006

(k) 1 (God) The Divine Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Faint bells tinkling in the background....
The night utters a soulful sigh,
To see Radha and Krishna
Bound in embrace. The full moon cries....
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Melvina Germain 12 November 2006

A great read and a good history lesson for me. Thankyou for sharing Tranquil---Melvina-

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 October 2006

The Indian Culture has always facinated me from the neru, jackets to the elaborate craftworkby hand....this is a wonderful piece, T.O....IIt sparkles with the essence of Tradition &Spirituality...Job well done'''''''''''FJR

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Michael Gale 23 September 2006

Great poem with well flowment of motion. I myself believe only in one God(The God and most holy father of Jesus Christ. We all have our own beliefs and heroes and gods. Hadda give this one a ten for being awesome. May any and all gods bless all poets-MJG.

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Elya Thorn 18 September 2006

Yes, I know about Lord Vishnu, I have read some stuff about it. Great poem, easy flowing! *~*Elya Thorn*~*

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Ruby Root 12 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, It's nice to see you share about a different religions. My mother is a shinto, my sons are catholics and I was baptized in the Japanese United Church. (ha ha) My son Gordie loves to read on Budhism. So I am open to any religion. God is God what ever one believes does not bother me. I think it makes our world a very unique place to live in. Excellent Poem and take care.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 September 2006

This is very beautiful writing and you share a wonderful craft Love duncan X

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Arti Chopra 30 August 2006

Beautiful poem.....thanks the scene can be verily imagined... arti

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Catastrophe King 19 August 2006

Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! ! You needed that inspiration to write and HE (you know who) gave you the reason. And what a better way than to start the collection-list with the poem on Radheya Krsna! You are the most BLESSED one and will be LOVED for a long time. Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! !

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Preeti - is here! 16 August 2006

Its just brilliant, you've presented them in such intense light. Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 16 August 2006

great poem, R...the hindu gods are so human...naughty and sensual...their characters types are found in bits and pieces in everybody...love...nalini

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***** ********* 16 August 2006

This is just beautiful Tranquil Ocean, if felt so real in the read. Brought tears to my eyes infact. The two gets in the middle felt out of sync, a little too jarring perhaps, an edit would smooth this poems gorgeous way to perfect, imo. Thank you so much for sharing it. Oceanonic Diviner, Tai

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David Darbyshire 16 August 2006

very very nice, sweet poem Love dave xxx

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