Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Justine Comments

Rating: 4.0

This bite I take
I will regret later
What is my fate, or
Lack there made
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Charlotte Andreski
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Noel Horlanda 15 July 2009

Yeah, this could be your first love? I think this feeling is only transient, in other words a puppy love. At least there is sincerity and honesty. I could see the way this piece of work is written. First love will never die, it will just fade away.Or I remember the boy but I don't remember the feeling anymore. This will come in later years yet. Don't worry you'll have him at least for a year or two. Thanks

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