Monday, April 16, 2007

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i lay entwined in your sheets
and cover myself with ragged breathing,
hoping the words falling from your lips
will be the words that i've been needing.
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Ana Podarevska
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Ivan Donn Carswell 24 April 2007

Ana, the title flows neatly into to a rendering of vulnerability exposed but composed and resolved with self-justification. The balance is well struck. Rgds, Ivan

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Elizabeth Sheaffer 16 April 2007

Wow... I'm in love with this poem, Ana. Amazing writing.

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Raymond Wright 16 April 2007

'Atta girl, Ana! beautifully rendered! ~Ray

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Ana Podarevska

Ana Podarevska

Kherson, Ukraine
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