Saturday, April 12, 2008

Justification! Why? Comments

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I must justify
What I deserve
I must clarify
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vaibhav shah
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Deepti Agarwal 22 April 2008

:) ... made me smile towards the end.... lovely use of words here.... n yes u brought out yr feelings well too.. :)

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Seema Chowdhury 15 April 2008

this is anice poema nd throught this i can reda your mind. it is frustrating to lead a regemented life with explanations and justifications. i agree. take care and enjoy your poetic life.

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Abha Sharma 12 April 2008

A monologue revealing the stream of consciousness, when the self feels tortured due to some righteousness denied. The penetrating internal rhetoric is effectively organizing facts for the presentation of truth, The rhetoric question is made for the deeper impact of the justification justified. ‘What ever it may be Proposition, suggestion or submission It shall not command my heart and me’. Well composed, with effective alliteration, colloquial diction and occasional rhyme.

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vaibhav shah

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Dungarpur (Rajasthan)
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