Justice Part 2 Comments

I love the way you write, it keeps me interested till the very last word and wanting more

justice never dies, justice finds its own level. nice poem. full marks. sorry for delay.

I think the poem is great, but remember, justice is mine, sayeth the lord.

justice...nice thought dave

Human might be able to gain a real justice after he could kill the demon within and I believed that the poet was found his way to welcome the truth and fear nothing in his life. Well done! ! !

i wonder wat influenced u t2 write a pecie like this

You know, Dave, at times it is good to leave justice for the Creator... One thing I like about the poem is the length.

Oooohh..very like..is so strong.justice... justice....! ! ! !

good poem it has truth in it good job

Wow, i like it.. Wonderful poem.. Life lies in between justice and injustice sometimes..nice concept..

Creative concept! The suspense it builds is crazy. I really like it!

Chill...the part two giving more surprise episode...It's cold like Eric told but it awesome...I like this it such another dimension from Part 1..simply like it.....The now i feel scared to meet doctor hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul

oh this ones really good, and thanks for liking mine its about self harm

strong, cold, and raw... like it a lot!

And it arrives! Part two to your amazing tale. I'm glad you've completed it. I love this, it's mysterious, and has a certain feel to it. Beautiful.