Justice Part 1 Comments

good poem, good poem, good poem, good poem. good poem

exceptional write...deeply felt and at somepoint everyday experienced...injustice

Wonderful write, I really like the way you laid it out....and the story kept me interest to the very last word...thx...hugs n blessings

This is my problem with humanity. There is no justice anymore. No one to proclaim liberty for the captives...

Sad poem but true, sometimes we suffer the penalty for the wrong of others and its when justice wear mask of denial! Profound write my friend!

Thank you for inviting me to read this poem. I read them all in fact. The seriousness of your tone is admirable and the subjects are poignant. I like the way you juxtapose the motif of confinement and dreaming, and the motif of violence and regret. A younger poet couldn't have written these. The compact stanzas and abrupt stanza breaks lend urgency to the presentations, and reflect the suddenness of impulsive, violent action. I liked them.

Heart breaker poem...Yet in your truth you fought to help another...all rewards are not received here on earth...Be Strong...You are good! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

I have no idea why the 'Delete this message' is above my comment...it is not at my request... Dorothy Alves Holmes Singing Still

Heart breaker poem...Yet in your truth you fought to help another...all rewards are not received here on earth...Be Strong...You are good! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Interesting and thought provoking read..need time to ponder. Strong message and imagery...liked it. What is justice, does it even exist anymore, did it ever? -SG

Such a wonderful poem with nice imagery. Keep on the good work.

Jamboree poem in the sensation...very deep dark secrets within....very well chosen verses

Awesome poem very moving

good for you dave, justice is a great concept to be taken in to a poem, and the most remarkable thing is you can alter the direction of the poem with good control to a sudden dramatic locations, reall you could be the most if you attempt the most, you're good as robert deniro said to billy crystall, you are good by ahmed khaled

A 10+ for your poem, quite riveting it is, Dave. Great job!

Big screen and applause from audience...Justice will come and you are saved..Such a moving and a challenge for 'fear' to scare you...Life still goes on so you will have more beautiful days to redeem...make it now! :) _Unwritten Soul

Thats really good man keep up the good work

Great poem, great story. very moving and thats what makes a great writing, thank you for sharing with us.

Very interesting, an epic story here, in this epic poem. Justice is a tricky thing, truly.

the price of justice... and the cost of honor... so few pay! great poem!