Saturday, December 10, 2011

Justice Of The External Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slaves to the powers
of the external mind
If your innocent or guilty
they do not mind
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Dave Alan Walker
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Amy Nicks 30 December 2011

Wonderful! You got me thinking now.

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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[But we cannot read other people mind] A g'd write! ! ! 10+++

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Sonali Sings 11 December 2011

Have your own stand then no mind can over power you i.e. realizing your own potential. Great write.

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Kamal Lalwani 10 December 2011

we have to make ourselves wake up, from all the illusions we dream on which r good for nothing so that it might help us from the justice of external mind.

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2011

A pinch of reality...it's enough for this recipe to get flavor in life poetry.. you teach me again to beware with around and people's mind..Nice reminder, thanks for this advice Dave_Unwritten Soul

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