Friday, January 9, 2015

Justice And Truth Comments

Rating: 5.0

What for God has created the man,
I could not understand even if I can,
I can't understand his amazing plan.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Farhan Mirza 14 January 2015

again this is fabulous. i love your work. you have been favorited.

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Salini Nair 10 January 2015

Games of love are merely His toys, Hearts He breaks and soles destroys............................beautiful..amazing work....enjoyed

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 January 2015

If feels the joys should have felt the pains, Integrated with love are many strains, Powerful presentation definitely where personal thoughts are expressed well.

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Valsa George 09 January 2015

Eve in the center and Adam in the rim! Do you think that when God made Adam and Eve, He placed Eve in the centre and Adam at the rim..... May be true! But unfortunately men reversed the order and Eve is always pushed to the rim! Many think that women are subservient to men and they have the right to treat women in any manner they like! Don't you think that this is injustice? Enjoyed! Don't you think that this is injustice....? Enjoyed !

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

Poem with a deep meaning, very beautifully written. Those important questions on the reasons for love and suffering are part of our life long search for the Truth with capital T. Extremely difficult to answer. Quite recently i wrote a small essay on that too (perfect world) . Can reach that reflection by googling reflectionsbyhans. It is the third reflection dated in April 2014.

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Bisma Mirza 09 January 2015

Superb! ! ! 10 on 10.... (y)

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 January 2015

A thoughtful poem.................10

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