Friday, November 17, 2006

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An eighteen-legged female spider
had fallen in a vat of cider.
She struggled with her puny legs
and lost, due to the fear, her eggs.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Chinedu Dike 01 May 2015

Beautiful rhyme scheme in a well articulated and nicely penned narrative poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Wandering Scarlet 23 August 2007

wow, i love the clever rhyming, its quite exceptional writing

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