Sunday, November 15, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just You Wait...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knock, knock
Who’s there?

It’s me the breeze
...
Read full text

Mamta Agarwal
COMMENTS
Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

It’s me the pigeon, want you to know I understand what its like to feel low. sometimes back i also wanted to say this to an indian woman-from australia--she only made me a criminal...... she also said 'just wait'--and i waited w/o understanding that there is a term just before her wait.......

0 0 Reply
Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 24 January 2010

they also serve God, who stand and wait

0 0 Reply
Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Great build up to a twisty climax.

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2009

you feel something and tell it..tell differently...then make others feel your words...that's a poet real good poem Mamta...talks to the reader heart straight...10

0 0 Reply
premji premji 21 November 2009

simple but profound thanks mamtaji

0 0 Reply
Meggie Gultiano 20 November 2009

WOW..I just love this, Mamta..I particularly love your last line. thank you for sharing your thoughts.. Shalom, Meggie

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 20 November 2009

This one glitters with your charm. Only you could have penned it. We are never really alone, are we? Warm wishes, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success