Thursday, January 11, 2007

Just You And Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

just you and me,
and the quiet morn,
your breath as it stirs
my sleep foregone,
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Arti Chopra
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Niner Alpha 18 April 2016

Wow last lines were heart touching.... Really nice

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 January 2007

Blissful, quelling work, my friend....Pristine structure...impactful language...Solid crafting... FJR

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