Sunday, August 30, 2020

Just You And Me… ❤️ Comments

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I reside between your breaths
like the moon between stars
like the waves in the ocean
like the wind passing leaves
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 03 September 2020

Just wow will say a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2020

Just the two of us! ! Just you and me; Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

We live together like the mountains in springtime like oasis in the desert Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies Just you and me…..❤️.......full of loving poem; nice to read; enjoyable

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Bwangwa Yukoshu 01 September 2020

There is no dearth of talent in India. Your poems proves that you are one of them.

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Prabha Devi 31 August 2020

Yes only two loving soul and nobody else to enjoy the nature's beauty. Nice poem.

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S H 30 August 2020

Nice one but instead of using so many similes you could have used some metaphors.

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Sharad Bhatia 30 August 2020

यकीन मान तुझसे प्यार करना चाहता हूँ दो शरीर एक जान होना चाहता हूँ थाम ले मेरा हाथ तुझे धड़कन और मैं तेरी साँसे बनना चाहता हूँ बहुत बेहतरीन प्यार 100++

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Varsha M 30 August 2020

Very true words. Very true feelings. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2020

Moon resides between stars and waves reside between ocean. Like you remain inside love of universal arms. Life becomes one in love. The mountain peak is built in oneness. An amazing love poem is beautifully penned with much beauty....10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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