Thursday, April 18, 2013

Just You And Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

It's two in the morning, everyone's gone,
Usually they all stay until dawn;
The smoke has cleared - I can finally see,
This is how I like it, just you and me
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2013

I've gotten pretty good at this fantasy - There never was you - it's always been just me A beautiful romance ends up in a great tragedy.

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Aman Arora 29 June 2013

beautiful once again the last 2 lines are a little heartbreak not just for you but for the readers who are enkoying the romance.

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A Waltz For Zizi 08 May 2013

What a wonderful poem this is. I gave you a ten.

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