Just You Comments

clearly shows your love for her, , , nice write, , ,

Lovely in it's honesty. I have trouble expressing things as well. If I could carry a pen and paper around and be given a 15 minute pause in conversation I could write it down but unfortunately my mouth says the silliest things. Very romantic, not in a faery taleish way but something attainable.

Impeccable in its purity no chasing cliches just good honest emotions laid out as a red carpet for the lady of your desire. I'm saving this as I love it. The tie up line speaks volumes plz excuse my age old cliche there but it fits. Tyvm karen

A new openness and ease in this piece, very enticing :)

Intoxicatingly beautiful! Very good indeed!

Beautiful and romantic Owain, a Valentine's treasure.

How beautiful Owain.. You are too late but, .......you could have made a mint for VALENTINES DAY

Lovely poem, heartfelt and beautifully written.