Wednesday, April 3, 2019

Just Wondering Comments

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I wonder what you are doing
I should be doing all the things I said I would

I wonder who you are talking to
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Jennifer Birchall
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Lyn Paul 03 April 2019

Moving on is a huge step. Writing works wonders along with joining a choir and getting a green thumb. May you start wondering about something wonderful you deserve!

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Jankovic Zoran 03 April 2019

It's a great wonder if you're wondering if he thought of you with any wonder. You are playing letters as a ping-pong ball. The poem has same sound, only the beat is stronger or weaker, longer or shorter. Nice.

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Julia Luber 03 April 2019

Nice meditation on wondering about the state of another and admitting that she has not moved on herself. Sad. But I know the problem myself.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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