...Just Walk The Path Of Life With Me.... Comments

lovely short poem, but not for pro poets like me, but for ordinary lovers of poetry, put more effort.

as you know we have to look at eyes of life not dreams.DREAMS SWALLOW poor lifes

you know something i feel like poem talks to any one wh reads it and the dream you talk about is great way you expressed you deserve ten 10+

keep that dream and go on dreaming..and wake up with that dream and you'll find out how lovely is the dream is...nice concept...10

ABSOLUTELY CORRECT....................hope.....soon your dreams will not be only a dream..... ill pray, it will be played in reality....this poem is clear, .....nice to read..... naizz

hope dream comes true....... nice poem........brilliant write.10 from lago

oh really some times we live great moments and amazing time put it soo sad to know that u r just dreaming. for that i always hope i don't wake up just to save the dreams... i said that once time in a poem of mine 'dreams must never broken ' Timon Cheers

Well written, simple very nice, i liked it

I loved this piece..