What are you thinking, why did you stop?
Just walk across, just walk
What do you know, what is here
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A wise message. Just by walking on, we can reach somewhere. Many times we feel stuck in a rut, feeling at the end of the world but life goes on n our survival depends on our pace. We must keep moving. Thanku for this wonderful advice Asim.
The repetitive line at the end of each stanza, echoes as a wise and compassionate voice, - as the interior, barely perceptive voice, that it can only be heard when we stop the mental activity: in a dream, day-dream, or reverie. This is an absolutely great poem!
Very motivating poem Asim... Thanks for that little push...We all need such inspiration now and then to move ahead in life. Thanks for this motivating poem.10+++
Inspiring poem. his life, never remained with anyone When did it left, who knew about it One who died, lost every senses Then why remember, your past Just walk across, just walk